Link to page: 2 - Introduction to the Roadmaps - caGrid 2.0 and Semantic Infrastructure 2.0
*Comments on November 22 Version:
In the part about the "linear value proposition", the last bullet says, "Support for both ad hoc and distributed queries." This seems to imply that they are mutually exclusive alternatives, which they are not. If some stimulative definitions are being used, then they need to be clarified here or different terms should be used.
Resolution:
Section 2 > Capability Big Buckets > Composability
The first sentence in this section either makes no commitments at all (any thing is potentially "available" for composition), or fails to constrain the problem of service composition so as to seem to drastically underestimate its complexity.
Resolution:
Section 2 > Architecture Paradigm: Semantically-Aware Service-Oriented Architecture (sSOA)
Unless the organizing principles, benefits and goals, and SOA design principles are specifically address later in the document, it seems to provide verily little value to include them here.
Resolution:
Section 2 > Service-Aware Interoperability Framework (SAIF)
This section references a sub section of another document and says that it is key to understanding this document. That makes this document incoherant. This document should at least define the specific aspects that must be understand and clearly indicate how the SI v2 relates to them.
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